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Plain and quiet, a girl with no name.
Who was dying on the inside, but showed no outer pain.

She wasn't like the rest, she could never be.
She felt unloved, she was never called pretty.

She tried to be what she hated the most,
So maybe someone would show her some love.

Forgotten, rejected, and on her own,
Loathed those who had cut her to the bone.

Each night her pillow was filled with tears,
Each day  her shoulders carried all her fears.

Alone she sat, ridiculed by all,
Her heart was heavy, she felt so small.

Burnt out and broken, She couldn't take no more,
Lost with out feeling, her wounds were sore.

Until one day, the light did shine,
and on that day she did feel fine.

She stood up and found her voice,
her name, and with her life she had a choice.

And if you look, and you will see,
that plain, quiet girl, that would be me.
Something I needed to put to paper, yes this was my feelings at a time, and gladly this has changed, though it was running though my head today, and line 4 relates to a most recent thought. (No it is not a plead for it, I'm not writing for pity as I said it was just a thought)
Title could do with a change it was the first thing I thought of. lol
Hopefully there are no mistakes this time, because I can't be bothered to change them. XD
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EclecticQuill Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
I'm glad this is no longer the way you feel, nobody should have to feel so isolated and alone.
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That was a real tough time
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EclecticQuill Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
I can scarcely imagine.... :( Takes strength to get through something like that.
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Made me stronger I think
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EclecticQuill Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
Aye, I bet it did. :) Just be careful not to hug me too tight, 'kay? XD
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe not that way hehe x
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EclecticQuill Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
Haha you're just saying that so you can squeeze me really tight... I'm gonna end up looking like this :tighthug: lol x
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
hahaha you'll be squished XD 
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cutlassknights Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very good work, we all live with out doubts and such, but greatness comes from within
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw thanks, well said brother! hallelujah! Lol
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