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As a child he watched, his heroes bask in glory,
Hoping that one day that would be his story.

All day and all night he worked himself to be the best,
Put his passion to the test.

Then one day he got a break,
A unknown fighter, against a flake.

With the dodge of a punch and the flick of the hand,
For the first time he was a winning man.

Notcied by a guy who looked like a bum,
Told he would train him, to be the one.

With the nod of a head and a shake of the hand,
Could there be a champion in this young man?

Blood, sweat and tears went hand in hand,
With new found titles, 'he's our man!'

He rose higher and higher on his winning streak,
But to the glitz and glamour  he became weak.

Lost in the glory that was his own,
feeling high on top of his throne.

But into the scene came a new kid in town,
Who took him on, and brought him down.

Down and out he had lost his fame,
So he turned to a bottle with no name.

And in a drunken rage he let rip on the town,
Caused him a lock up in old downtown.

Finally out sober and sorry, he looked at himself, and did not know the man he saw, a crazy drunk who thought he was above the law?

So on that day he made a change, to go back to his roots and stay that way.

He was gonna fight his way back to the top,
Hard work and faith to keep him up.

So one day again the world would see, the champion he was meant to be.
Just something random I wrote when I couldn't sleep last night, finshed around 12:45 last night. :s

I not really sure where this came from, but it's about boxer and his life. With the beginning, the ups and downs.

Hope you enjoy. :meow:

*This is a edit of the first upload, because I'm a hurp de durp who can't spell, or upload the right copy of her work.*
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EclecticQuill Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
This is good, a really strong narrative. :)
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TheIndigoFeather Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Written when midnight was soo late for me, the amount of mistakes I made on this one was unreal though
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EclecticQuill Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
Haha you laugh at midnight now =P lol Aye, I spell check all of my work before uploading.... though some mistakes still get through :no:
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TheIndigoFeather Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I laugh in its face XD I think I wrote it on my iPod like a durp
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EclecticQuill Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
Hahaha and in 3am's too XD Ah, I do all mine on my laptop
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TheIndigoFeather Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh yeah I'll be doing all nighters soon XD ah well I vary from what ever is closest at the time, I've been known to write on the note part of my phone
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EclecticQuill Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
Woo! All nighters :dummy: I scribble stuff down on paper all the time, but very rarely use anything electronic other than my laptop
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TheIndigoFeather Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
woohoo! Need more coffee though! aww I see 
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AmeliadosSantos Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I like that. it's a whole story, with meaning and speechs and characters, but it's extremely short and all in verse (thank you, Captain Obvious, for pointing that out). I feel like this is your kind of thing and you're really good at it. nicely done!!
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TheIndigoFeather Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, you really think? Ha I'm good at something for once! (look mom look!) lol
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