This is an extract of a musical I'm writing, it is only my first draft and I wanted to see what you all thought about it before I desided to write/upload more. I'm not quite sure if this will be the opening scene or I might put something before it.
It is about the main character Layla (needs a second name), a struggling singer.
It also has something to do with her bestfriend and band mate Ryan (also needs a second name) I really suck a thinking up names. And their relationship.
It is based in the 1950's because the main problem (without giving to much away) wouldn't really be big problem now adays as it was then.
It also has some thing to do with these two [link][link]
Favourites are wonderful but I really need feed back on this more than anything. Thanks
Also I'm not really sure if the title has been used before, but it was the first thing I could think of at 12:15am so I will probably change it later