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Walking lonely on the path of life, the dark shadow always at my side.

See the light, but as I walk it gets further away.
You are golden, but I'm scared to touch you incase you break like glass.

Why do I feel alone in a room full of strangers, why do I feel like the only one to walk this earth?

Inside my heart feels heavy, but my body feels hollow, one breeze and I might break.

I feel lost, I feel alone but yet I know you are there.

Please always be there.
I think this is word vomit. I just wrote what I feel.
Not a good day.
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TMaR18 Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Forget word vomit, it's emotional, heartfelt, and very well written. I am genuinely jealous, I can't write free verse poetry to save my life. So a job well done, I could feel the heaviness and hollowness.
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TheIndigoFeather Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, thank you very much. It really just was written to get it off my chest, but it means alot that you can see the emotions I tried to portray.
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TMaR18 Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome!
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TheIndigoFeather Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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EclecticQuill Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
This is so sad :( :huggle:
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TheIndigoFeather Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah that was a bad time, best not to dwell though
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EclecticQuill Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
Aye, I can understand that.
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TheIndigoFeather Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aye I'm much much happier now :)
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EclecticQuill Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
Aye, it shows in your poetry :)
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TheIndigoFeather Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad it does
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