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You married a High school fling,
Sold your Mustang for a wedding ring.

You got married in a church,
Though I've never heard you say a prayer.

She floated down the isle,
Though she wasn't the one who caught your stare.

I sat in the gallery, hid myself from view,
Though I knew you could see me, you and only you.

You moved from the city, to live in a country home,
But in this big old house, you're bound to feel alone.

Two years on, you got the big news,
You should be happy, yet you're singing the baby blues.

She sold your records to buy a crib,
The last thing you had of the life you once lived.

Now the music in your live is gone,
Replace rock and roll with a 3am baby call.

You work in a office each day, to make ends meet,
I remember when you told me you would never be tied down, but now your tied, hands and feet.

Do you still have your guitar, or did she sell it too?
Married life has changed you, but truly I don't blame you.

Do you remember the love song that you wrote? Because I do,
You said you where saving it for someone special.

Did she hear that song? I highly doubt she'd understand,
The strong connection we had in that band.

But I guess I could be wrong, but then again I know you,
That song was only heard by two.

And those two, were me and you.
I really don't know...

This first started off with me singing a musical like tune, and then
I was considering adding cords to this and maybe making it in a full song, but then I changed a lot of other stuff in it and I don't think I will now..
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TheIndigoFeather Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow thank you ^^
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No worries.
Actually, the first time I read this poem, I had the idea of write a journal about songs... but then, other ideas, other things... you know.
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TheIndigoFeather Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh Okies, but thank you very much anyways. :iconnewhugplz:
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What a shame... I was already looking for watch it on youtube ;)

It kind of reminds me of "Someone like you" - Adele.
Then, in a certain way, I still can associate it to a song in my mind.

It's strange... you see people changing so much.
Sometimes you see people doing the things they were least likely to.
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TheIndigoFeather Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, see I sang it before I wrote it so maybe at some point I might again.

I'm glad you can put a tune to it, a least there's someone who sees it still as a song.

Actually, humans are very unpredictable.
I really thinking about making a play and then this would be re written as a song
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A play?
Good luck witht it. :D

Watch the video on youtube would be already cool... but watch a play would be much, much, much better! :D
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TheIndigoFeather Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well a sort of musical, maybe just something really to pass the time, but it's something I've wanted to do for a long time, I've started brainstorming things already, though I know I'll be stuck for names of characters that's always my main problem.
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I like it, but there was something that kept annoying me, and distracted me from the meaning of the poem. It's you're, from you are, not your. Exept for that, i like it. alot. ^^
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TheIndigoFeather Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Filp I always mess them up (bad English teacher), I'll change it, to be honest, it wasn't ment to be a poem to start of with, it was supost to be a sort of musical song and then I changed it, sorry.
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