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Sometimes I have to laugh at the things you do, but darling I'm not laughing with you, darling it's at you.

The way you act is plain stupid, actually like yourself.

I don't mean to be mean, but when it comes to you, it's something I just can't help.

Lies and rumours you have spread about me, have just been over the top, not that I really give a damn about your simple thoughts.

But when it comes to my friends, honey that's a different story, and  believe me if you hurt them, you will be truly sorry.

But just remember this, and it's the last thing I will say, what goes around comes around, and one day you will pay.
God this sounds super mean, but I needed to rant, directed at someone I unfortunately know. But they are not of DA so don't worry it's none of you guys :heart:

Yeah it's late and I'm angry so this is what you get, haha enjoy?

I'm not sure about the title, might change later..
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C-Allagash Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
Hello,

Feature here:
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Please, let me know if there's any problem ;)

Cheers!
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hi,
How would there be a problem, I feel honered and also you ended it with my favourite song of all time!!
Thank you!
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C-Allagash Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
Isn't it an interesting coincidence?

When I visit your profile, I don't why I think about Owl City!
Mysteries of life ;)

Glad you like it :)
It was a bit hard to decie which work I should feature.
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Truely is a mystery. Lol

:iconadamyoungplz: :heart:

Well I'm really happy you choose mine, I've never be featured for anything XD
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C-Allagash Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
It's not that I'm into revenge, but this is something I REALLY can relate to.

And the first line made smile, although it brings bad memories to my mind.

Rancour can be bad, but this piece is great!!!! :D
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow thanks, I'm not really into revenge either but with the certain person that this is aimed at I don't think I would think twice about it. I'm glad it made you smile, and I really didnt want you to think of anything bad, I'm sorry for that.

Thank you very much for the fave too.
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C-Allagash Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
No worries.

The part "Lies and rumours you have spread about me" made me think about something I lived.
But it's already past.
Everytime I thought about it, I felt bad. But, this poem made me think about it... and laugh! That's the first time it happens.
Therefore, please, don't apologize. Actually, I have to thank you!
Here it goes.... thank you! :D

I really like it, of course I had to fave it.
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh well then! I'm super happy that you got a laugh out of it!
Thank you this comment made me smile! :D
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NemoX7 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012   Writer
Title seems appropriate to me. Structure is pretty great and I love the them behind. Sometimes having a bit of rant can help vent the anger and inspire a great piece of work like this. Bravo.
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw thank you so much, comments like this mean so much to me
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EclecticQuill Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Student Writer
:clap:
Karma's a bitch, and she bites hard :nod:

This is good, I can relate to it.... :)
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks this is angry rant writing lol
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EclecticQuill Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Student Writer
No worries.
I have one like that... "Liar" although it is more confused than this, I wasn't sure who I was angry with, the person it was directed at, or myself... :)
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, that does sound super confusing.
No I'm usual calm but when it comes to her, I'm holding my self back from doing something that could get me a life sentance :s
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EclecticQuill Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Student Writer
The poem itself is fairly simple, but the thoughts and emotions that went into it....
Me too.... If I were any more laid back I'd be upside down. :laughing: Been there plenty of times, some people just beg to be slapped so hard their great grandmother would feel it...
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Simplicity, a lot of my stuff falls under that category lol.
Hahaha!! I know some people are just asking for it.... :fork:
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EclecticQuill Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Student Writer
My stuff is quite the eclectic mix... Simplicity, sophisticated, complex, blatant... All have their place amongst my work. :)
Trouble is, even when you give them the ass kicking they deserve, they still come back for more...
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
See I would love to have that range in my work but I'm not that good.

I know! Most of them could do with a good jump....off a high building..
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suzukoyan Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
amazing as always :D
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awe thanks!
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suzukoyan Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
your welcome
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:3
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crystallized-skies Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's always better to rant than hold it all in. Great job though. :)
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw thanks
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crystallized-skies Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome (:
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:3
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AmeliadosSantos Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
the title is fine, don't worry.

is it about that girl you told me? it sounds like it's for her... lol
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yep it's for that waste of space.. She's been doing my head in lately and were not even at school....
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