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July 20, 2012
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Sometimes I have to laugh at the things you do, but darling I'm not laughing with you, darling it's at you.

The way you act is plain stupid, actually like yourself.

I don't mean to be mean, but when it comes to you, it's something I just can't help.

Lies and rumours you have spread about me, have just been over the top, not that I really give a damn about your simple thoughts.

But when it comes to my friends, honey that's a different story, and  believe me if you hurt them, you will be truly sorry.

But just remember this, and it's the last thing I will say, what goes around comes around, and one day you will pay.
God this sounds super mean, but I needed to rant, directed at someone I unfortunately know. But they are not of DA so don't worry it's none of you guys :heart:

Yeah it's late and I'm angry so this is what you get, haha enjoy?

I'm not sure about the title, might change later..
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Feature here:

Please, let me know if there's any problem ;)

TheIndigoFeather Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
How would there be a problem, I feel honered and also you ended it with my favourite song of all time!!
Thank you!
Isn't it an interesting coincidence?

When I visit your profile, I don't why I think about Owl City!
Mysteries of life ;)

Glad you like it :)
It was a bit hard to decie which work I should feature.
TheIndigoFeather Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Truely is a mystery. Lol

:iconadamyoungplz: :heart:

Well I'm really happy you choose mine, I've never be featured for anything XD
It's not that I'm into revenge, but this is something I REALLY can relate to.

And the first line made smile, although it brings bad memories to my mind.

Rancour can be bad, but this piece is great!!!! :D
TheIndigoFeather Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow thanks, I'm not really into revenge either but with the certain person that this is aimed at I don't think I would think twice about it. I'm glad it made you smile, and I really didnt want you to think of anything bad, I'm sorry for that.

Thank you very much for the fave too.
No worries.

The part "Lies and rumours you have spread about me" made me think about something I lived.
But it's already past.
Everytime I thought about it, I felt bad. But, this poem made me think about it... and laugh! That's the first time it happens.
Therefore, please, don't apologize. Actually, I have to thank you!
Here it goes.... thank you! :D

I really like it, of course I had to fave it.
TheIndigoFeather Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh well then! I'm super happy that you got a laugh out of it!
Thank you this comment made me smile! :D
NemoX7 Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Title seems appropriate to me. Structure is pretty great and I love the them behind. Sometimes having a bit of rant can help vent the anger and inspire a great piece of work like this. Bravo.
TheIndigoFeather Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw thank you so much, comments like this mean so much to me
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