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Sometimes I have to laugh at the things you do, but darling I'm not laughing with you, darling it's at you.

The way you act is plain stupid, actually like yourself.

I don't mean to be mean, but when it comes to you, it's something I just can't help.

Lies and rumours you have spread about me, have just been over the top, not that I really give a damn about your simple thoughts.

But when it comes to my friends, honey that's a different story, and  believe me if you hurt them, you will be truly sorry.

But just remember this, and it's the last thing I will say, what goes around comes around, and one day you will pay.
God this sounds super mean, but I needed to rant, directed at someone I unfortunately know. But they are not of DA so don't worry it's none of you guys :heart:

Yeah it's late and I'm angry so this is what you get, haha enjoy?

I'm not sure about the title, might change later..
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C-Allagash Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
Hello,

Feature here:
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Please, let me know if there's any problem ;)

Cheers!
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hi,
How would there be a problem, I feel honered and also you ended it with my favourite song of all time!!
Thank you!
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C-Allagash Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
Isn't it an interesting coincidence?

When I visit your profile, I don't why I think about Owl City!
Mysteries of life ;)

Glad you like it :)
It was a bit hard to decie which work I should feature.
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Truely is a mystery. Lol

:iconadamyoungplz: :heart:

Well I'm really happy you choose mine, I've never be featured for anything XD
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C-Allagash Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
It's not that I'm into revenge, but this is something I REALLY can relate to.

And the first line made smile, although it brings bad memories to my mind.

Rancour can be bad, but this piece is great!!!! :D
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow thanks, I'm not really into revenge either but with the certain person that this is aimed at I don't think I would think twice about it. I'm glad it made you smile, and I really didnt want you to think of anything bad, I'm sorry for that.

Thank you very much for the fave too.
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C-Allagash Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
No worries.

The part "Lies and rumours you have spread about me" made me think about something I lived.
But it's already past.
Everytime I thought about it, I felt bad. But, this poem made me think about it... and laugh! That's the first time it happens.
Therefore, please, don't apologize. Actually, I have to thank you!
Here it goes.... thank you! :D

I really like it, of course I had to fave it.
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh well then! I'm super happy that you got a laugh out of it!
Thank you this comment made me smile! :D
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NemoX7 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012   Writer
Title seems appropriate to me. Structure is pretty great and I love the them behind. Sometimes having a bit of rant can help vent the anger and inspire a great piece of work like this. Bravo.
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw thank you so much, comments like this mean so much to me
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