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In a smoke filled room, mixed with a musty sent of cheep perfume and dryed lust. Love left this place years ago but this  is were she resides.
Under a lace and feather cover is were she hides.
Long black hair, that falls gentlely down her back like a waterfall, coressting her pale white skin.
Her deep brown eyes outlined heavily  with glitter, and gold  and toped wih thick black mascara, like heavy black feathers they flutter over her eyes. The same eyes that could lead a man to there demise with just a wink.
And under this perfect shell, a body that some would die for, a body that kills some, but yet it hides a broken soul of a lost child.
A child that has seen so much, but yet has felt so little, and now the child is lost forever and now all that is left is this monster with the rouge red lips.
This was triggered by a smell, and music.
My mum sent me on a bus trip to the coast today, and because I was bored out of my mind I wrote this, there was a elderly woman in front of me and she was wearing a very old and thick smelling purfume, which sort of got me thinking, then I had my iPod on shuffle and the song 'lady marmalade' started playing some the mixture of these two elements made me write this :meow:
I put it down as poetry but I'm not quite sure if it is.
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EclecticQuill Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
This is actually really good, the imagery is incredible. I got an image of like an Estella type character (from Great Expectations)
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh that you, I was a bus by myself and this what sprang to mind
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EclecticQuill Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
No worries, it's great when you get flashes of inspiration like that.... especially when they turn out this good.
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well it was something different to say the least
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EclecticQuill Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
Different is good :)
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It is :)
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EclecticQuill Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
Aye, too much sameness gets boring really quickly.
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know, just makes things dull y'know
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AmeliadosSantos Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
it is poetry, though there are no verses. I like that. it's deep and full of senses and perceptions. nice one, girl!
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh Merci! Chicka :meow:
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