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In a smoke filled room, mixed with a musty sent of cheep perfume and dryed lust. Love left this place years ago but this  is were she resides.
Under a lace and feather cover is were she hides.
Long black hair, that falls gentlely down her back like a waterfall, coressting her pale white skin.
Her deep brown eyes outlined heavily  with glitter, and gold  and toped wih thick black mascara, like heavy black feathers they flutter over her eyes. The same eyes that could lead a man to there demise with just a wink.
And under this perfect shell, a body that some would die for, a body that kills some, but yet it hides a broken soul of a lost child.
A child that has seen so much, but yet has felt so little, and now the child is lost forever and now all that is left is this monster with the rouge red lips.
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This was triggered by a smell, and music.
My mum sent me on a bus trip to the coast today, and because I was bored out of my mind I wrote this, there was a elderly woman in front of me and she was wearing a very old and thick smelling purfume, which sort of got me thinking, then I had my iPod on shuffle and the song 'lady marmalade' started playing some the mixture of these two elements made me write this :meow:
I put it down as poetry but I'm not quite sure if it is.
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~AmeliadosSantos Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
it is poetry, though there are no verses. I like that. it's deep and full of senses and perceptions. nice one, girl!
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~TheIndigoFeather Jul 6, 2012  Student Writer
Oh Merci! Chicka :meow:
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~AmeliadosSantos Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome, sweetie!
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~TheIndigoFeather Jul 6, 2012  Student Writer
Lol
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