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She was everything you wanted, she was everything I wanted to be.

She had everything you needed, so you never looked to me.

She gave you everything, so you never took from me.

She's beautiful, you know that, we all know the same, I don't know why I bother with this game.

She loves you more than anything, and I hope she always will.

She always care for you,she'll keep you strong when times are tough, I could never be enough.

She's the one for you, a match made in heaven they say, she makes you happy, I guess I never could.

She's everything you wanted, she's everything I wanted to be.

I'm sorry but why can't it be me?
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I really don't know where these emotions come from sometimes.
-sigh- Just to make things clear this 'she' isn't real, but she is the person I will never be, and the reason why the 'he' will never want me.
Yeah I feel kinda sad by this... (sorry to the reader)
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~The-Feral-Gentleman Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Bravo!

This is raw and has a bitterly reflective honesty to it.
Structurely it's written with a fluidity that makes it both seamless and instantly digestible.

Job well done and keep up the good work.

P.S. I also find the story at its heart painfully familiar.
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~TheIndigoFeather Jul 30, 2012  Student Writer
Wow thanks!
Thank you this really means a lot.
I'm sad that story had reawaken some pain in your life.
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Mood: Unhappy ~The-Random-Dreamer May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know how you feel. This is good, it's really... impactful. Sorry i know what i mean but i don't really know how to describe it.
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~TheIndigoFeather May 29, 2012  Student Writer
Aww it's ok I understand, I'm glad that you understood the message.
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~xxspoooonsxxx May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know how this feels
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~TheIndigoFeather May 28, 2012  Student Writer
yeah its just horrible right
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~xxspoooonsxxx May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Jeeaaalooouusssyyy.
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~TheIndigoFeather May 28, 2012  Student Writer
Umm I don't know if it is cause the person I was refairing to isn't really real, well I don't think I guess I had a few people in mind when I wrote this. Oh sometimes I just don't know.
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~xxspoooonsxxx May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha that's ok.
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~TheIndigoFeather May 28, 2012  Student Writer
:) At least someone understands.
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