Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
×

:icontheindigofeather: More from TheIndigoFeather


Featured in Collections

poem by suzukoyan

Literature by Umeko13

Literature by IceDancer21


More from DeviantArt



Details

Submitted on
May 28, 2012
File Size
806 bytes
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
185
Favourites
9 (who?)
Comments
35
×
She was everything you wanted, she was everything I wanted to be.

She had everything you needed, so you never looked to me.

She gave you everything, so you never took from me.

She's beautiful, you know that, we all know the same, I don't know why I bother with this game.

She loves you more than anything, and I hope she always will.

She always care for you,she'll keep you strong when times are tough, I could never be enough.

She's the one for you, a match made in heaven they say, she makes you happy, I guess I never could.

She's everything you wanted, she's everything I wanted to be.

I'm sorry but why can't it be me?
I really don't know where these emotions come from sometimes.
-sigh- Just to make things clear this 'she' isn't real, but she is the person I will never be, and the reason why the 'he' will never want me.
Yeah I feel kinda sad by this... (sorry to the reader)
Add a Comment:
 
:iconeclecticquill:
EclecticQuill Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Student Writer
"I'm sorry but why can't it be me?" It is :heart:
Reply
:icontheindigofeather:
TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hehehe alot has changed, and I'm so happy it is me :heart: 
Reply
:iconeclecticquill:
EclecticQuill Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Student Writer
Aye, so much water under the bridge.... I'm glad it's you too :love:
Reply
:icontheindigofeather:
TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aye loads and loads, hehe aww :aww: 
Reply
:iconeclecticquill:
EclecticQuill Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Student Writer
The destination is made more worthwhile by the journey :heart: but I'm glad my journey is over.... so ours can begin :smooch: :love:
Reply
:icontheindigofeather:
TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awww it'll be amazing :love: 
Reply
:iconeclecticquill:
EclecticQuill Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Student Writer
Hehe a rather complicated way to say I love you and I can't wait to see what the future holds for us :love: x
Reply
:icontheindigofeather:
TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awwww ditto love you loads xoxo
Reply
(1 Reply)
:iconthe-feral-gentleman:
The-Feral-Gentleman Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Bravo!

This is raw and has a bitterly reflective honesty to it.
Structurely it's written with a fluidity that makes it both seamless and instantly digestible.

Job well done and keep up the good work.

P.S. I also find the story at its heart painfully familiar.
Reply
:icontheindigofeather:
TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow thanks!
Thank you this really means a lot.
I'm sad that story had reawaken some pain in your life.
Reply
:iconthe-random-dreamer:
The-Random-Dreamer Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know how you feel. This is good, it's really... impactful. Sorry i know what i mean but i don't really know how to describe it.
Reply
:icontheindigofeather:
TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww it's ok I understand, I'm glad that you understood the message.
Reply
:iconxxspoooonsxxx:
xxspoooonsxxx Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know how this feels
Reply
:icontheindigofeather:
TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yeah its just horrible right
Reply
:iconxxspoooonsxxx:
xxspoooonsxxx Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Jeeaaalooouusssyyy.
Reply
:icontheindigofeather:
TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Umm I don't know if it is cause the person I was refairing to isn't really real, well I don't think I guess I had a few people in mind when I wrote this. Oh sometimes I just don't know.
Reply
:iconxxspoooonsxxx:
xxspoooonsxxx Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha that's ok.
Reply
:icontheindigofeather:
TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:) At least someone understands.
Reply
:iconxxspoooonsxxx:
xxspoooonsxxx Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yes I'm here for anything too even though I just meant you lol justsayin
Reply
:icontheindigofeather:
TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, now your my new friend. :) Thanks
Reply
(1 Reply)
:icontheindigofeather:
TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yeah I've kinda put my self in a downer with this.. :(
Reply
:icondeadwoodkimono:
DeadwoodKimono Featured By Owner May 28, 2012
That's so true....
Reply
Add a Comment: