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Is it wrong to want someone all to yourself for just one day....
Just one night...

Under the moonlight on a secluded beach.
Or a day spent in Paris or Nice?

Maybe I'm wrong to be wanting something I can't have,
but I'm still dreaming of a life we could of had.

I've seen my dreams shattered when she's around,
My heart ripped in two, and I'm left feeling like a clown.

And I'm left thinking to myself is there nothing I can do,
to let you know how much I love you?
Feeling a little low at the moment, I guess a lack of sleep can do that to you, but I felt compelled to write.
Anyway I've been thinking about wanting to be with someone but I don't think it would be very likely to happen.
I've been thinking about romantic places and thats the france refrence mixed with me wanting to go there again.
Once again the she isn't real, but I've been thinking thats she is a mixture of people.

-sigh- I feel that all my work has became doomy and gloomy, but everytime I write something this kinda stuff just flows out of me.
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TheLittoralViolet Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
This is pretty, The emotion really comes across and its quite poetic-
My only issue- capital for Paris?
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TheIndigoFeather Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh thank you, umm oh I see what you mean now, I guess I could change that now thanks.
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TheLittoralViolet Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
it's only a little thing- but it was the only thing I picked up on c:
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